Saturday, October 22, 2011

The Secrets of Life...

The touch of Mother
So soothing from start of life
Overcoming all fears
Flowing purest love

The voice of Father
Sometimes hard sometimes soft
Guiding and protecting
Unabashed pride

The face of a Loved one
Strength to bend nature's will
Passionate till world’s end
Acceptance without conditions

The presence of Friends
The chosen family
Unbiased opinions and advice
Being there at all times.

3 comments:

  1. Hey..yea..Finally poetry blog.after lot of forcing,requesting and scolding also :) :)..I am not a person who understands much about poem,but i do like your poems sometimes :) kidding !!I liked this poem ..They say there are 3 basic needs to survive Food,Cloth and Shelter..Your poem gives 4 secrets to actually live life and makes it complete that's how I could relate your poem to life :) :)...

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  2. Nice one Pramesh... Well written.
    So now u have a book and a blog for your poems... Thanks to your dear wife... :-)
    -Shweta

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  3. It's nice :):)
    But next time try n squeeze in ur siblings :P
    Put up some more !!

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